Friday, March 12, 2010

Waqt - Bewaqt

Raaste mein chalte chalte, subah sham dhalte dhalte,

jab hum unse takraaye the

tab humne yeh jaana tha aur tab humne yeh dekha tha,

ki raaste ke saare phool humein dekh muskuraaye the


Un darakhton se hum guzre, un jharno ka paani piya,

unse kabhi kuchh na maanga bas jee bhar ke pyaar diya

haathon mein haath lekar jab woh saath hamare chalte the,

aankh band kar lene par kuchh meethe sapne palte the

us hari ghaas ki sez pe baith humne sapne sajaaye the,

ki raaste ke saare phool humein dekh muskuraaye the


Parvaton ne mere sur ko door door tak pahunchaya,

nadiyon ki khal khal ne apna ras bhi chhalkaya

apne saath lekar gayeen aur door samandar pahunchaya,

aur saagar ne saath diya toh raag nikhar ke aaya

panchhiyon ne hamare saath woh sur gungunaaye the,

ki raaste ke saare phool humein dekh muskuraaye the.


Ab un raaston par jhadte darakht dikhte hain, sookhe jharne milte hain,

ab woh zameen mujhse poochhti hai ki akele kahan chalte hain,

haath chhoot chuke hain, sapne toot chuke hain,

jinse kal takraaye the wahi aaj rooth chuke hain.

woh raaste ke phool ab murjha chuke hain,

kyunki us pal mein aane wale aaj muh pher ke jaa chuke hain.

11 comments:

Stuti said...

Really nice...I didn't know tumhare paas itna talent hai...keep writing...bt end i guess needs a little working upon.

Good attempt nonetheless :)

Kabi mad kabhi sad said...

I seriously doubt that you have written the whole of it..Kiska copy kiya hai? But if 0.1% this is your creation, then loads of applause. The lines are wonderful, so touching. I am quite impressed re! Keep writing.

Amit Nigam said...

@ parjaai: i wont say anythng to convince u but its totally my creation....

Quest Master said...

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Praveen Sharma said...

Sahi hai yaaar. Very nice creation.

Srushti Rao said...

Very nice I must say... pehle khushi hai phir dard hai...

Nice use of words. Keep it up :)

Priyanka Gupta said...

good one..keep up the good work, write more frequently..

Unknown said...

Oomda piece Bhai ekdum... Tune hee likha hai na??? I know tune hee likha hai... Good Work Keep It Up...

Unknown said...

Very nice. keep it up!!!!!!!!!!. I didn't know you can write so well.

delhidreams said...

good attempt dear :)
looking forward to reading more of ur poetry.

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